Biscuit

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October 02, 2011, at 10:36 PM by confluence -
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Only the cook, Crusty, and you know that he was your father. You are
cocky and frequently speak out of turn but are quick to become
submissive when confronted.

Crusty has always been abusive towards you and moments ago as the
lantern blew out in the cave, you took your chance, grabbed Captain
Nobeard's gun from the floor and shot Crusty. Before the lantern could
be relit, you quickly replaced the gun in its original position.

Tenzin is eyeing you suspiciously -- does the parrot somehow know that
you shot your father? The parrots accusing gaze is making you feel
guilty. You must elimate the bird before it somehow squawks your crime
to the captain or Silvertongue!

With Crusty dead, your thoughts have suddenly turned to what to do
with your new-won freedom. The Captain and Silvertongue have agreed to
split it 50/50 but if you act the wounded innocent boy who has lost
his father, perhaps they might cut you in? Even a small share would
you set you up well once you return to port.
to:
Only the cook, Crusty, and you knowand Crusty the cook knew that he was your father. You are
cocky
cocky and frequently speak out of turn but are quick to become
submissive
submissive when confronted.

Crusty hashad always been abusive towards you -- and moments agoago, as the
lantern
lantern blew out in the cave, you took your chance, grabbed Captain
Nobeard
Nobeard's gun from the floor and shot Crusty. Before the lantern could
be
be relit, you quickly replaced the gun in its original position.

Tenzin is eyeing you suspiciously -- does the parrot somehow know that
you
you shot your father? The parrotsparrot's accusing gaze is making you feel
guilty.
guilty. You must elimateeliminate the bird before it somehow squawks your crime
to
to the captain or Silvertongue!

With Crusty dead, your thoughts have suddenly turned to what to do
with
with your new-won freedom. The Captain and Silvertongue have agreed to
split
split it 50/5050/50, but if you act the wounded innocent boy who has lost
his
his father, perhaps they might cut you in? Even a small share would
you
set you up well once you return to port.

Changed lines 17-32 from:
* '''Captain Nobeard''': An effeminate captain with a bit of a vicious
streat. You and the crew frequently tease him about this -- although
you're always careful to become placatory just before he blows his
top. The captain is fond of you and allows you to get away with more
than most of the rest of the crew.

* '''Silvertongue, first mate''': An overly organized ex-navy man. He also
seems quite fond of you. At least he never bosses you around.

* '''Tenzin, the parrot''': What does the stupid motor-mouth bird know!?
You must get rid of it before it blabs something. Now you wish you
hadn't put the gun back down!

* '''Crusty, your father (deceased)''': Dead by your hand and you're glad
of it. He was abusive and unkind to you -- but always only in
private.
to:
* '''Captain Nobeard''': An effeminate captain with a bit of a vicious
streat.
streak. You and the crew frequently tease him about this -- although
you
you're always careful to become placatory just before he blows his
top.
top. The captain is fond of you and allows you to get away with more
than
than most of the rest of the crew.

* '''Silvertongue, first mate''': An overly organized ex-navy man. He also
seems
seems quite fond of you. At least he never bosses you around.

* '''Tenzin, the parrot''': What does the stupid motor-mouth bird know!?
You
You must get rid of it before it blabs something. Now you wish you
hadn
hadn't put the gun back down!

* '''Crusty, your father (deceased)''': Dead by your hand and you're glad
of
of it. He was abusive and unkind to you -- but always only in
private.
private.
October 02, 2011, at 09:58 PM by hodgestar -
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(:title Biscuit:)

''Cabin boy, cocky and devious''

Age: ''14''

Only the cook, Crusty, and you know that he was your father. You are
cocky and frequently speak out of turn but are quick to become
submissive when confronted.

Crusty has always been abusive towards you and moments ago as the
lantern blew out in the cave, you took your chance, grabbed Captain
Nobeard's gun from the floor and shot Crusty. Before the lantern could
be relit, you quickly replaced the gun in its original position.

Tenzin is eyeing you suspiciously -- does the parrot somehow know that
you shot your father? The parrots accusing gaze is making you feel
guilty. You must elimate the bird before it somehow squawks your crime
to the captain or Silvertongue!

With Crusty dead, your thoughts have suddenly turned to what to do
with your new-won freedom. The Captain and Silvertongue have agreed to
split it 50/50 but if you act the wounded innocent boy who has lost
his father, perhaps they might cut you in? Even a small share would
you set you up well once you return to port.

!!!Other characters

* '''Captain Nobeard''': An effeminate captain with a bit of a vicious
streat. You and the crew frequently tease him about this -- although
you're always careful to become placatory just before he blows his
top. The captain is fond of you and allows you to get away with more
than most of the rest of the crew.

* '''Silvertongue, first mate''': An overly organized ex-navy man. He also
seems quite fond of you. At least he never bosses you around.

* '''Tenzin, the parrot''': What does the stupid motor-mouth bird know!?
You must get rid of it before it blabs something. Now you wish you
hadn't put the gun back down!

* '''Crusty, your father (deceased)''': Dead by your hand and you're glad
of it. He was abusive and unkind to you -- but always only in
private.

!!!Motivation

* get treasure -- you have a life to start!
* avoid getting killed

!!!Equipment

* lantern

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