Corrections

DONE:

• Everywhere:
  • Cooper an able seaman, not a private.
  • Rewrote descriptions of other characters in prose.
• Winchester:
  • removed first name
  • shortened intro to ship incident.
  • merged "very assertive", etc. under Sheffield with earlier descriptions of self.
  • made descriptions of other characters gender-neutral.
• Sheffield:
  • removed reference to king
  • Changed debtor's prison to workhouse (my bad).
• Smith:
  • Made nature of attack in message more specific.
  • Reordered fatalist interjections a bit.

TODO:

• Everywhere:
  • Decide on exact circumstances of battle aftermath—near mainland / island, etc., and put in background or make consistent in character sheets
• Winchester:
  • Shorten paragraph about father and navy? Add more personality traits?
  • should be civillian / not an admiral?
  • was s/he in charge on the ship / the one to give the order to abandon?